[@Grec]

Alright, you almost have got it, just the age is wrong when compared to his birthdate. and you need to list a city for the Birthplace, since just saying New York could mean any place in the state.

Also, under possessions you still have the engines in hands which in your history section said were removed. Combat skills, well... We're talking things like "running", "stamina", "boxing", stuff like that. You have only a few small changes to make for the character.