[quote=@BingTheWing] [@Gcold] When will the first IC post be up? [/quote] After we get everyone's sheet in or before the end of this week, whichever comes first. [quote=@Kingfisher] Thanks for the detailed feedback man, I really appreciate it. 20 stone to lb is 280 pounds, so that's an easy fix for me. I'll do that now. The Chief is supposed to be someone whose always trying to make new connections, and his deal with the Chatterjee Outfit was intended to be his first opportunity to try and branch out to India. I can add a reference to that into the bio if you'd like? As for the personality section, it was supposed to be that Delilah is someone who acts humane when she has the luxury to, but can easily shed her disguise of caring at the drop of a hat, if it means she'll benefit. Sorry if that wasn't conveyed in the way I'd worded things. I can make those changes asap, if that's all? [/quote] Yes, these are what I'm looking for.