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[@Archmage MC] My attempt at a Toon Girl:

[img]http://i1347.photobucket.com/albums/p707/Member00492/1ToonGirl_zpswrjuuyjp.png[/img]

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Pretty good. Too human looking though. Head is supposed to be way more round, almost sphere, and eyes are bigger, much bigger, like halfway to chibi big. (after all she has ALL that space with no nose and whatnot) Think, I dunno... Sonic character or Pokemon character? (though eyes aren't THAT close if doing sonic character.) Also a more cuter eye style, I've got a picture with the correct eye concept (will have to link in PMs though.) Dress also needs an M cut out of the front and be a bit longer but not by much. Wider hips, Lighter blues, no armbands. Also probably smaller boobs or a more broader chest. Those look too big for her but then that might be the way that art style has to do them in which case thats fine. Or wait, I think they sag too much is the problem, or have little support? Still might just be the artstyle. Rest works fine.

Thanks. I appreciate it, shes kinda wonky to make.