[@Kingfisher], I'd like you to go deeper with Delilah's personality. Specifically, how did she develop her caring exterior and ruthless exterior? Also, tell us how she got her gun.

[@Greenie], good. Just add in Kamala's birth place and specify her current residence when you drop the sheet in our roster. You can use Ghaverdasanna Townhomes, Southside, which is also where Veejay lives.

[@Virgil], you've given Benjamin some connections to Sopahn, however, his bio is still vague. As it stands, Benjamin's background isn't well-explained, and is confusing to read with a lot of metaphors. I don't think you are making a lot of improvements to your character. Sorry, I cannot include you in this RP based on your submissions.