[quote=@Gcold]
[@Virgil], you've given Benjamin some connections to Sopahn, however, his bio is still vague. As it stands, Benjamin's background isn't well-explained, and is confusing to read with a lot of metaphors. I don't think you are making a lot of improvements to your character. Sorry, I cannot include you in this RP based on your submissions.
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Fair enough; Take care you all.