I'm putting my sheet up for sake of reference. It's not complete, as no sheet can be before we go through the 'kinship' section!

[@Mr Rage]
Great character concept overall! Reinhardt is one of my favorite characters in Overwatch, and it's always good to have a big guy on the team. I hope your search for a realistic picture alternative is going well! Here are some other comments. On the name, do about 4 spaces between the first and last name. Expand a little upon how people would perceive Ajax (presence). What you have written in the 'ideology' section is background information. Try to go into values, morals, ideas about the world and life, thoughts on human interaction, and such. You don't need to describe Ajax's combat techniques beforehand if you don't want to, and you also don't need to impose negative consequences if they are based on assistance from spirits. Guardians can use magic freely to create abilities and attacks on the fly when they fight. Sure, they can stick to signature moves that they've created, but don't feel that you have to limit yourself! 

[@71452K]
I get a Count of Monte Cristo meets Nikola Tesla-feel from your character, which is [i]very[/i] cool. Any realistic picture alternative to go with that sheet? Instead of 'Research Division, Spirit Sciences', put just 'Research'. There is a bit that you can expand upon the ideology section, just delving deeper into what Montero feels about certain ideas and values, moral issues, and things you already mentioned. Amusing reference to the card game in the setting! 


[@deadpixel101]
Could you include Pardosa's full name? Great picture! Your text was a little confusing to read due to the mixed pronoun usage. I appreciate that some people like to partake in identity politics, but I have to make it clear that it won't be a prominent theme in the context of this story. Pardosa can still have these mindsets, though! The points made in the presence and ideology sections are very clear and good, so they deserve to be expanded upon where possible. From your 'strife' section, I assume the weapon of choice is conjuring some kind of elemental weapons? Correct me if I'm wrong.

[@WanderingSpirit]
Looks great so far! I'm not sure if you wanted some comments yet. Is his surname Cahn or Polaris? Or is Polaris a nickname?

[@Rizza]
Very ambitious sheet! You can put just 'Warfare' instead of 'Warfare Division'. The ideology section is great, but make sure that you and your character know what some of these virtues mean. For example, "Treat people as they should be treated" can be interpreted in many different ways, some of which are not very nice. Of course, I'm not going to be some kind of morality police here. In the context of all the other virtues, this one is bound to be a good one as well. You can change "Jeet Kune Do and Krav Maga" to just 'martial arts'. I have no idea what those two (I assume) fighting styles are or what they look like, and in the context of the lore, they wouldn't exist by those names. You could create new names for those styles, if you want!