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That's the most realistic image of this character that I have,
it's very very awkward when I put photos. I tried but there's something really bugging about it, kept thinking "Wtf". But this is as good as a photo, yes? :).

I'll expand the ideology section, sure, his specialisation should be apparent enough that not listing would not change much. Heheheh, I mean, you made the effort to come up with a card game so why not include it? Got to be realistic, which student won't indulge in a little Recreational TCG if it's no harm?

I shall make your recommended changes tonight. [@Prisk]
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Excellent. I suppose I can make an exception on the picture. It looks like a painted portrait for an actual person, anyway, so it's okay. It almost fits the character. It's a bit of a Dorian Gray-feel!

[quote=@deadpixel101]
[@Prisk]

Hey there~

Made a few adjustments. Boy did I not notice how much I messed up with the the pronouns. I made more of them "he" so that it's an easier read lol. I didn't really mean for it to come up much, just something that felt right for the character.  

And I'm still debating what exactly his tools are. I do enjoy the idea of him crafting weapons like ice daggers on the fly, but he also feels the type to me to come prepared. Maybe bring a tactical knife and sidearm? 

Perhaps just the gun, because I doubt he can make [u]that[/u] out of ice. Otherwise you are correct, he crafts them on the go. 

I should add that to the strife section as well yes? I will also try and expand my presence and ideology sections. 
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Yes. You can go with a knife/sword + sidearm, and then play with the idea of 'coating' the melee weapon with elements! That would make much more sense in the context of the lore.