[@Arty Fox]
the bad :

- mention of such things as 'cabs' and 'tabloids' in the Bio gives it a bit of a ..'modern' feel

- the Abilities section should explain what she can do (mostly) combat-wise. Language skills, remembering details and tracking are more fitting in the Skills section. 

the good : 

- added to the world-building 
- a ranged oriented character, which we lack.

other than that, all seems fine. Fixing 'the bad' will net you an acceptance :)


ALSO @everyone

The Introductory Post for the IC will begin in very-late Friday or sometime during Saturday. I'm giving these couple of days time for whoever else would like to apply and maybe, just MAYBE, present us with a support oriented character (#notimposingrestrictionsoranything). Got any friends, colleagues, room-mates, semi-human-hybrid-creations or the like which you think may be interested in this RP? All are welcome to take a look. 

Until the story starts, have a good one everyone :D