[@boomlover]

I believe everyone else is helping you out with the content of your CS. They pretty much nailed what I had in mind for the character. His Semblance is pretty worthless if it just makes him angry and could make him a liability, though, so my suggestion is to give him something that makes him stronger as a result of the Semblance. Or you can change it completely if you intend on changing the personality. I'm not a big fan of psychopathic students even if non-student characters outside of the academy are... more than questionable at times. Someone who just gets fascinated at explosives/demolition (your most recent suggestion) does certainly work better than someone who should normally be in a hospital/jail for treatment. I'm sure you can come up with something good as long as you receive feedback from us.

As for the CS's format itself, I believe it needs a lot more fine-tuning in the grammar side of things. I very frequently type lazily outside of IC Posts or formal posts, and I don't judge people at all for it, but consistent clarity is really important in this RP. You seem very passionate about joining so I'm going to do everything to have you join, but I also hope you understand where I'm coming from.