[@Lugubrious] So a few little things I noticed.  First Racial classes do have levels so I don't think they can be zero, so that should be changed.  Could go over it again with a brush too, few misspellings I noticed like bruther(brother), inter(enter), etc.  The dad's Wii must have been one well kept antique since the series takes place quite a bit in the future.

Overall the character is fine but does need a few corrections.

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We're starting with game version of Yggdrasil so the characters can experience the confusion of the transference over to a [i]real[/i] world.  Gives you some leeway to explore how they cope with the situation, or don't.