@IVIasterjay Nice, two CS's. Here is my review : - Taiyou “Tai” Munashii 1. ) The personality and history are for me alright. So no need in my opinion to change that. 2.) The skill are a bit off, so to say. Would you mind changing it to 'high speed', instead of faster than a speeding bullet. I doubt somebody would like to move at that speed as it would not only result in a tunnel vision, but some other nasty traits as well. Same goes for the nintaijutsu. If you would please change that, that would be great. 3.) I am saying no to : Fire Release: Great Fire Annihilation. Great Fire destruction is already something I find a bit much, but am willing to accept it. If you would please remove Fire Annihilation, that would work for me. 4.) There are some custom jutsu I find a bit too powerful. Not to mention that I would like to see a number of handseals, as using powerful jutsu without a handseal or such is a bit too much, in my book. 1. Fire Release Armor ; Concept of the jutsu is fine with me. Nothing wrong with that. I do think the fact that anybody near him for 30 seconds is a bit too much. Same goes for that he can melt anything that touches. If he is really fast, then that means he can just try to stay close for 30 seconds and then your dead, which means the weakness isn't really that great for a S ranked jutsu. If you would please mind to tone it a bit down with the power, then I would be fine with it. 2.) I think the speed needs to be toned down a bit. If he can augment his speed by the use of fire, while already being fast that would a bit too much. I prefer you would say the range of the jutsu, as flamethrowers can go for some length and it would be nice to know how far this jutsu can go. 3.) Solar Flare is able to cut like a blade is bit iffy. You need some super heat to cut with fire through material as it often sets things on fire, rather then cutting through it. At least, like I get your jutsu. 4.) Fire Release: Rising Dragon sounds more like a S ranked technique to me. Not to mention that I find it a bit too much that the dragon can re-create the dragon if somebody manages to get him out of the ring. The fire itself is already a good defense, but that he also can cover an area with a blanket of fire is a bit too much. I need to go to work soon, so I will review your genin later. ;)