[quote][Active] Titanic Defense: Maria replaces her armor with Titanus' own, turning her into an impregnable fortress of steel. The armor protects her from any physical damage, but greatly reduces her mobility. Duration 4, CD 20.[/quote] How much is her mobility reduced exactly? [quote]Titanic Shield: Maria summons Titanus' shield, which has the same properties as his armor. Any physical blow that contacts the shield is turned away, and the impact behind the shield becomes negligable.[/quote] Defensive utility is great, but it's very easy to make a defensive character OP if you unlock decent offenses later on (the plan was to have a 4th ability slot introduced in a pre-guildfall mission.) I think it's best to offer you a choice regarding this ability; you can lower it's effectiveness a bit, or leave it like this but have me be a lot more picky about Maria's future abilities. [quote]Titanic Crystal: Maria summons a crystal shield that absorbs any harmful magic directed at it. Each spell it blocks lights up one of the 12 crystal sections that make up the shield, and when 3 or more are filled Maria can release a shock wave from the shield, consuming the magic to force anyone in front of the shield backwards, as if she had Shoved them. (Every 3 crystals lit simulates 1 level of Shove) [Active] Titanic Refraction: Instead of a shockwave, Maria can release the magic stored in the shield in it's original form, casting the spell meant for her at whomever she chooses. The spell is unchanged (If it was set to track her, it will still track her. If it couldn't effect the caster, it still won't.), but she releases it in the direction the shield is facing. Duration 1, CD 5+ CD of the spells released, if any. Only one spell in every set of three crystals can be cast.[/quote] Looks good. And the rest of her character seems in order also. Just clarify/adjust a bit and I'll add her to the list (which I totally need to update.) [quote=Valeric] Can't wait for custom tabs to be implemented. This RP would benefit from it so much... I don't have to hunt for my own mission posts. [/quote] Yeah, that´ll be great indeed. It'd also save my having a dozen of links in the OP. [quote=Hedya] I was writing now and I felt I had to comment on something. At some point in the past, someone pointed out that the character "Simon Getskilled" had a... suspicious name. I hadn't realised that, as I always read it "Get Skilled" and only realised it could be "Gets Killed" when someone else (sorry I forgot who) pointed it out. Maybe a second reading of sorts? Haha!! Sorry, sorry... [/quote] I actually stole it from [url=http://girlyyy.com/]this[/url]. [quote=chukklehed] I probably only saw it that way because I was watching a youtube video, and one of the characters was "Guy Diesatstart". It had a scene that went:"What's your name?""Guy. Guy Diesatstart. And his name is Dude. Dude Alsodies.""Do you ever get the feeling your names bring with them a sense of impending doom?"*Shrugs* [/quote] They've lived so far and their parents seem to have made it to the point of reproduction. It's not so ominous when you put it into perspective ;)