[quote=@Tenma Tendo] Here's what I have to my character. I hope everything is alright. If something is wrong with anything, just let me know and I'll be sure to fix it ^^ [hider=Eunha Park][center][h3][color=lightpink]Eunha Park[/color][/h3] [img]https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/236x/1d/a0/dd/1da0dd4cf3e5be090d18ce0a47d746e7--kookie-bts-jungkook--baby.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/vzs8AZv.jpg[/img] [sub][b]"[i]Trust is like a sheet of paper. Once it's crumpled, it can never be perfect again.[/i]"[/b][/sub] -[b]Unknown Author[/b][hr][hr] [color=lightpink][b]Name;[/b][/color] [indent]Eunha Haneul Park[/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Nickname;[/b][/color] [indent]Eun, Kiddo[/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Birth Date;[/b][/color] [indent]April 27[/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Age;[/b][/color] [indent]18 (Internationally), 19 (Korea)[/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Zodiac Sign;[/b][/color] [indent]Taurus[/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Gender;[/b][/color] [indent]Male[/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Sexuality;[/b][/color] [indent]Bisexual[/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Rich or Poor;[/b][/color] [indent]Poor[/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Trust Fund or Scholarship;[/b][/color] [indent]Trust Fund[/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Major;[/b][/color] [indent]Dance[/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Minor;[/b][/color] [indent]Baking and Pastry Arts[/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Occupation;[/b][/color] [indent]Interns at a prestigious bakery as a prep cook and works at a well known dance studio as a teacher's assistant.[/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Social Status;[/b][/color] [indent]Low Class, especially since he is a foreigner.[/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Spending Habits;[/b][/color] [indent]Eunha is a very loose spender. If he sees something cool that he wants, he'll automatically pay for it without even thinking about it.[/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Face Claim;[/b][/color] [indent]Jungkook from BTS[/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Dialogue Color;[/b][/color] [indent][color=lightpink]Light Pink[/color][/indent][hr] [color=lightpink][b]In Depth Appearance;[/b][/color] [indent]Eunha is a rather short boy, standing around five feet and three inches, with short layered black hair he tends to dye on his free time, dark brown eyes, and pale skin that often makes those around him believe he's sickly. With a fairly muscular body that doesn't take away from his innocent features and weighing about one hundred and ten pounds, Eunha has three piercings on his left ear and one on his right. He had no notable scars or injured, but if his pale skin where to come into contact with anything that's rough or of varying texture, he'll start to chafe.[/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Clothing Style;[/b][/color] [indent]Eunha is a fan of wearing layered clothing that he can just take off if he gets too hot. Blacks, whites, and neutral colors are usually what he sticks with as they don't stimulate his SPD. He normally has on a long wife-beater with a jacket over top and sweatpants.; all of his clothing are entirely cotton as he gets rashes from other based fabrics. When not dressed to dance, Eunha wears long sleeved shirts and sweaters, jackets, beanies, and simple jeans or under armor with shorts over top with boots or converse. Eunha also has a teal colored hoodie that he likes to wear when he's feeling down or scared. Those who know him well understand that the hoodie also helps him when he's overstimulated. Eunha also always carries around a bag with a few necessities like headphones, gloves, and said hoodie if he isn't already wearing it.[/indent][hr] [color=lightpink][b]Likes;[/b][/color] [indent]Sweets, Dancing, Warm Meals, His Favorite Fuzzy Hoodie, Quiet Places, His Friends, Family, Nighttime, Cooking for His Friends[/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Dislikes;[/b][/color] [indent]The Cold, Screaming, Loud Noises, Leaf Blowers. Anything that's Slimey, Smelly, Bright or Itchy, Change, Sudden Noise. Anything that would set off his SPD[/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Habits;[/b][/color] [indent]Tends to speak in Korean when experiencing extreme emotions, Easily distracted by anything around him, and he physically can't stay still for five minutes. [/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Hobbies;[/b][/color] [indent]Cooking, Dancing, Doing Taekwondo, Sewing, Knitting, Playing Video Games, Sleeping[/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Fears;[/b][/color] [indent]Large Crowds, Heights, Over-stimulation, Needles, Ghosts, Being Alone[/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Personality Traits;[/b][/color] [indent]Kind, Strong-Willed, Emotional, Expressive, Playful, Eccentric, Impatient, Easy to Cry, Extremely Jumpy, Oblivious, Aggressive, Blunt, Conceited, Nosy[/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Personality;[/b][/color] [indent]Eun is an extremely happy and playful boy, despite where and how he grew up. He's almost always seen smiling and tries his hardest to make others smile as well. Much like a puppy, he'll always try and get everyone's attention in the room and make them happy or feel better. He has a habit with incorporating Korean word or phrases with his English. With eccentric tendencies to boot, Eun is expressive and energetic, bouncing all over the place when in the dance studio and during classes, finding anywhere within the studio to fall asleep when he gets tired. Eunha is an outgoing, despite quick to lose steam, and lively person who usually thinks about everything positively. He is nice and friendly to those he meets, and will also try to help or defend anyone that previously came to his aid. He often becomes amused at certain personality traits and quirks others may exhibit, sometimes to the point of bursting into laughter, which he tries to suppress to some extent. Despite those oddities, there are times where Eunha unusually takes on an extremely determined, focused and somewhat intimidating attitude when the situation calls for it, which can come as a surprise to those who are used to his nice and cheerful side. He also doesn't like to be underestimated. Although Eun is usually seen excitable and happy, he too has his off days. Any time his parents are fighting or his SPD acts up, the boy becomes extremely quiet, that usually being an indicator that something is wrong. Usually a few hours after the event that made him upset happens he'd be back to normal, but if it's really bad, it would result in crying, panic attacks, meltdowns, mental breakdowns, vomiting and so much more; just one thing has to tip him off to make him upset. So long story short, Eun is a nice person all together, but when things don't go his way, he'll outwardly show how much it weighs on his mind.[/indent][hr] [color=lightpink][b]Place of Origin;[/b][/color] [indent]Seoul, South Korea[/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Background;[/b][/color] [indent]Park Ik-Eun ("Ik-Eun Park" in America), or Eun for short, was born in Seoul, South Korea. He lived happily there for five years before his parents decided to move to California in search of better help for Eun's SPD (Sensory Possessing Disorder, which he was diagnosed having when he was three. Unfortunately, but to be expected, with the sudden move and change in lifestyle, Eun's condition gradually got worse, resulting in the boy being hospitalized only a few weeks after arriving. He spent four years in the hospital, as the doctors were unsure if the change of going outside and home would make his condition worse or not. While in the hospital, Eun didn't really have many friends at first, since he didn't know the language, so the only way he was able to communicate was by dancing, something he liked to do when still in Korea. With his unique and extreme skill in being able to contort his body, the kids at the hospital quickly gravitated towards him, despite his inability to speak the language. He met new people who taught him various different styles of dance, hip-hop and b-boying more specifically; he got into waacking and krumping once he left the hospital. Eun's life seemed to become as normal as it could get, before his parents had to forcefully discharge him due to expenses. Eun had to say goodbye to all the friends that taught him how to dance and was whisked away back home, only to realize how much he's put his parents through. For one thing, the house looked a lot less shiny and more than ready to fall apart; the inside wasn't any better either. There was no electricity (this was actually pretty nice for Eun), barely any running water (the water was always cold, so taking showers was painful), cold meals (ones that were eaten in silence), and so much more. The boy had already cracked under the stress and anxiety of living there only a few days in, but he had to suck it up. He hid his mental, emotional, and physical condition away from his parents, who were always fighting openly about the financial problems he put them in, and went mentally insane; giggling when he got hurt, screaming for no reason, spouting complete gibberish, and laying awake at night mostly due to his bed sheets chafing his all too sensitive skin. He remained like this for quite awhile, that is, until his 14th birthday. He hadn't received a gift in ages, so he wasn't expecting one, that is, until his parents graced him with his now iconic, and still far too big, teal fuzzy hoodie, and told him that despite all their fighting they still loved him. This managed to bring the old Eun back, as his mental health ceased to decline any further. The hoodie gave him a sense of protection, it gave him the strength to go outside and do something with himself. This all ultimately led to Ik-Eun becoming more active in school, taking on internships and jobs to help his parents, and even applying to Hollywood University in order to get the best education possible.[/indent] [color=lightpink][b]Extra; (Bryce Papenbrook, he's a VA)[/b][/color] [indent]Eunha suffers from [url=http://www.webmd.com/children/sensory-processing-disorder]Sensory Processing Disorder[/url]. Sensory processing disorder is a condition in which the brain has trouble receiving and responding to information that comes in through the senses. In Eunha's case, he's can be overstimulated by all senses and also suffers from a lack of equilibrium, but in the later's case, only when fatigued.[/indent][hr][/center][/hider] [/quote] Hm, the only thing I see wrong really is just the fact that he is poor but has a trust fund? If he's poor, it should be scholarship instead. :) Once you've changed that, please let me know. [quote=@Slingshot] Here's my character. Let me know what you think. [hider=Character's Name][center][h3][color=maroon]Tony[/color][/h3] [img]https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/7b/80/12/7b801232f15278b0391ca564eef00b73--fashion-guys-mens-fashion.jpg[/img] [sub][b]"[i] “I should warn you, princess – the first time tends to get a little messy.”[/i]"[/b][/sub] -[b]Freddy Krueger[/b][hr][hr] [color=maroon][b]Name[/b][/color] [indent]Anthony Scott Lieberman[/indent] [color=maroon][b]Nickname[/b][/color] [indent]Tony[/indent] [color=maroon][b]Birth Date[/b][/color] [indent]March 16 1997[/indent] [color=maroon][b]Age[/b][/color] [indent]20[/indent] [color=maroon][b]Zodiac Sign[/b][/color] [indent]Pisces[/indent] [color=maroon][b]Gender[/b][/color] [indent]Male[/indent] [color=maroon][b]Sexuality[/b][/color] [indent]Hetero[/indent] [color=maroon][b]Rich or Poor[/b][/color] [indent]Rich[/indent] [color=maroon][b]Trust Fund or Scholarship[/b][/color] [indent]Trust Fund[/indent] [color=maroon][b]Major[/b][/color] [indent]Fashion Modeling[/indent] [color=maroon][b]Minor[/b][/color] [indent]Performing Arts[/indent] [color=Maroon][b]Occupation[/b][/color] [indent]Fashion Model(Young Mens, Underwear, Swimsuit)[/indent] [color=maroon][b]Social Status[/b][/color] [indent]High Upper Class[/indent] [color=maroon][b]Spending Habits[/b][/color] [indent]Avid Spender[/indent] [color=maroon][b]Face Claim[/b][/color] [indent]IDK[/indent] [color=maroon][b]Dialogue Color[/b][/color] [indent][color=maroon]Maroon[/color][/indent][hr] [color=maroon][b]In Depth Appearance[/b][/color] [indent]Tony is roughly 5'10 and 165 lbs. He has a lean and slender build. He keeps his body free of tattoos or piercings for modeling purposes. He has a generally youthful appearance, often being mistaken for a teenager.[/indent] [color=maroon][b]Clothing Style[/b][/color] [indent]Tony is often wearing the latest fashions and most expensive clothes. He'll usually wear clothes given to him by the clothing lines he models for. He has a particular taste for bright colors. He wears a lot of flashy jewelry and watches. The only thing that he wears regularly is his favorite pair of black sunglasses.[/indent][.hr] [color=maroon][b]Likes[/b][/color] [indent]Money; Partying; Sex; Expensive Things; Fashion; Alcohol; Being the center of attention; Exercise; slasher movies[/indent] [color=maroon][b]Dislikes;[/b][/color] [indent]School; Poor People; Party-Poopers; Being slightly inconvenienced; Authority; Ugly People[/indent] [color=maroon][b]Habits[/b][/color] [indent]Will often stand in a modeling pose without even noticing, eye twitches occasionally, will use any opportunity to go shirtless[/indent] [color=maroon][b]Hobbies;[/b][/color] [indent]Partying; Exercise; Sex; Harming Small Animals[/indent] [color=maroon][b]Fears[/b][/color] [indent]Being alone; growing old; responsibility; people learning his secrets[/indent] [color=maroon][b]Personality Traits;[/b][/color] [indent]He's an egotistical, rude, chauvinistic, selfish, attention-seeking, and materialistic closeted psychopath. [/indent] [color=maroon][b]Personality[/b][/color] [indent]Tony is a very egotistical person. He only cares about himself and views everyone else as just side-characters in the story of his life. He's mean and rude to anybody he doesn't like. He thinks he's the most attractive and intelligent person in the world. He doesn't like hard work and prefers the easy life, given that he's had servants do everything for him in life. He uses his money to get everything he wants and to give himself power over people. Tony also enjoys hurting animals and sometimes wonders what it would be like to hurt a person.[/indent][.hr] [color=maroon][b]Place of Origin[/b][/color] [indent]Beverly Hills, CA[/indent] [color=maroon][b]Background[/b][/color] [indent]Tony is the son of a legendary movie producer Gerald K. Lieberman and one of the greatest actresses of all time Sarah Jane Lieberman. Tony was born in the lap of luxury, never having to do anything. He grew up having everything he ever wanted. This kind of life eventually led to him being the spoiled and arrogant brat that he is today. Now he's a big name in the modeling industry and making even more money than he already got from his parents. He also loved to watch slasher movies growing up. There was just something about watching some guy go around and just kill people that he found so entertaining. When he was a kid he had a dog named Rufus. One day when Tony's family was gone he got curious about how it would feel to kill another living thing. So he took Rufus into his bedroom...wrapped his fingers around Rufus' throat...and he choked him. He squeezed on that puppies neck and watched as fear overtook his eyes, and then life disappeared from them. He stared at the dead corpse of his furry friend and a strange twisted smile came on his lips. That night he found his new favorite hobby. Now he's always finding new interesting ways to hurt living creatures, But who knows how far he'll go. [/indent] [color=maroon][b]Extra[/b][/color] [indent]Samuel L. Jackson[/indent][hr][/center][/hider] [/quote] Uhm, not sure how to feel about your character, to be honest. :/ Why would anyone that had a luxurious life want to hurt animals? Plus, he's a model so what if he had to model with an animal, would he harm the animal afterwards? I am just not sure that they way you wrote him is a fit for the roleplay especially within a college setting. [quote=@SouffleGirl123] [@HushedWhispers] Same char as original :) [hider=Christina Partridge][center][url=http://fontmeme.com/calligraphy-fonts/][img]http://fontmeme.com/permalink/170402/a20508508774404da745ee70c3899034.png[/img][/url] [img]https://2.bp.blogspot.com/-I7XXpKJOsrY/UFczw3VvyTI/AAAAAAAAXMQ/liBwH8mNCao/s1600/Lacey+Mosley09.gif[/img] [IMG]http://data.whicdn.com/images/8317258/large.gif[/IMG] [sub][b]"[i]Cursed is the one who trusts in man, who draws strength from mere flesh.[/i]"[/b][/sub] -[b]Lacey Sturm[/b][/center][hr][hr] [url=http://fontmeme.com/calligraphy-fonts/][img]http://fontmeme.com/permalink/170402/59b0b351b26e90082fef662083b5b4cb.png[/img][/url] [color=FF8C00][b]Name;[/b][/color] [indent]Christina Leigh Partridge[/indent] [color=FF8C00][b]Nickname;[/b][/color] [indent]Chris, Christie. She’ll accept almost anything from friends but doesn’t like having people she doesn’t know well calling her anything other than Christina[/indent] [color=FF8C00][b]Birth Date;[/b][/color] [indent]5th December[/indent] [color=FF8C00][b]Age;[/b][/color] [indent]19[/indent] [color=FF8C00][b]Zodiac Sign;[/b][/color] [indent]Capricorn[/indent] [color=FF8C00][b]Gender;[/b][/color] [indent]Female.[/indent] [color=FF8C00][b]Sexuality;[/b][/color] [indent]Hetero-romanic. She’s never been sexually attracted to anyone but isn’t yet sure if she asexual or is demisexual or something else [/indent] [color=FF8C00][b]Rich or Poor;[/b][/color] [indent]Poor[/indent] [color=FF8C00][b]Trust Fund or Scholarship;[/b][/color] [indent]Scholarship[/indent] [color=FF8C00][b]Major;[/b][/color] [indent]Music Theory and Composition[/indent] [color=FF8C00][b]Minor;[/b][/color] [indent]Music (performance) [/indent] [color=FF8C00][b]Occupation;[/b][/color] [indent]Christina is waitress at a local restaurant, not the high-grade modelling career of her rich peers but it pays the rent and the bills [/indent] [color=FF8C00][b]Social Status;[/b][/color] [indent]Lower Middle Class [/indent] [color=FF8C00][b]Spending Habits;[/b][/color] [indent] Budget Spender. She hardly has a choice otherwise. She does save up to treat herself occasionally though.[/indent][hr] [url=http://fontmeme.com/calligraphy-fonts/][img]http://fontmeme.com/permalink/170402/0faa70389e5ceb7cdcafa172d542d237.png[/img][/url] [color=FF8C00][b]In Depth Appearance;[/b][/color] [indent]In comparison to many of her peer which Christina describes as “Bloody frickin’ runway-model-level beauties,”; Christina is quick to title herself as plain-looking. Not at all a queen nor noticeable in appearance she fails to hold the grace and poise of her ‘runway peers’. Standing at only 4’10” fails to stand over even most 12-year-olds. Luckily, she doesn’t possess a baby face or she [i]would[/i] look 12 years old. Christina has light, fair skin that dons no obvious freckles but her face sports a few blemishes. Her straight black hair is choppy at best, usually cut at home with a pair of scissors. Overtime Christina has come to actually like the choppy look of her hair and hasn’t done anything to change it but occasionally snip off dead ends in her bathroom. She doesn’t go to extremes to style, nor does she do anything beyond basic with it in most cases. Her almond shaped eyes are a dark brown. Christina doesn’t often bother with make-up other than the basics, although she doesn’t even bother with that half the time. [/indent] [color=FF8C00][b]Clothing Style;[/b][/color] [indent]Christina isn’t one to spend a long time picking an outfit. Even just buying clothes is a no more than a simple chore for her. Having little financially Christina doesn’t wear designer brands. Her clothing ‘style’ is more of a case of ‘what can I throw on in seconds?’. As long as it isn’t visibly dirty, doesn’t smell [i]too[/i] much and doesn’t look utterly mismatched, she’s happy. She wear a range of clothes from jeans to casual dresses, always topped off with her mock converse shoes. The only consistent items on her body is a silver crucifix on a necklace.[/indent][hr] [url=http://fontmeme.com/calligraphy-fonts/][img]http://fontmeme.com/permalink/170402/01f9f6aad80126a7a81dc90659389d94.png[/img][/url] [color=FF8C00][b]Likes;[/b][/color] [indent] [color=#008800]✔[/color] Music of all sorts [color=#008800]✔[/color] Playing violin and singing [color=#008800]✔[/color] Her family [color=#008800]✔[/color] Trivia, puzzles and riddles [color=#008800]✔[/color] Reading [color=#008800]✔[/color] Pizza [color=#008800]✔[/color] Red meat [color=#008800]✔[/color] Tea [color=#008800]✔[/color] Crime drama shows and movies [/indent] [color=FF8C00][b]Dislikes;[/b][/color] [indent] [color=#ff0000]✘[/color] Snobs [color=#ff0000]✘[/color] Soppy teen romance movies [color=#ff0000]✘[/color] Heavy makeup- she reckons it feels gross [color=#ff0000]✘[/color] Social media- it bugs her more than it amuses her [color=#ff0000]✘[/color] Wild Parties [color=#ff0000]✘[/color] Being seen as ‘lesser’ because of her appearance and/or financial situation[/indent] [color=FF8C00][b]Habits;[/b][/color] [indent]~ Fidgeting with her fingers whenever she’s not doing anything with them ~ Chewing the inside of cheek when she’s thinking ~ Drinking large amounts of tea in the evening [/indent] [color=FF8C00][b]Hobbies;[/b][/color] [indent]~ Singing ~ Playing Violin ~ Doing puzzle of all sorts (from jigsaws to word puzzles) ~ baking[/indent] [color=FF8C00][b]Fears;[/b][/color] [indent]~ Snakes ~ Not being able to achieve a goal she has set for herself ~ Losing herself[/indent] [color=FF8C00][b]Personality Traits;[/b][/color] [indent]~ Ambitious ~ Hardworking ~ Opinionated ~ Sarcastic ~ Caring, generally… most of the time… with most people ~ Loyal ~ Judges heavily from the outside before she knows a person ~ Charitable[/indent] [color=FF8C00][b]Personality;[/b][/color] [indent]Christina is a very ambitious, she often creates large wild goals that are not easily achievable, luckily, Christina and a very hard-working mindset. Christina was never one to pick up something and just naturally have skill with it but she is one to work hours upon hours to gain skill. She is more than happy to give up me-time and days out with friends to tackle a problem or study on something she doesn’t understand. She’s not one to give up either, some claim she’s a bit [i]too[/i] persistent. Christina is rather opinionated and stubborn in her opinions once she’s set on them, although, she can be swayed on some topics on uncommon occasions. Christina is, to her own frustration at times, one to ‘judge a book by is cover’ as fa as her first impressions on people go. She tends to find herself more comfortable with those who don’t seem rich and is quick to assume things upon one’s appearance, however, she does change her opinion as she gets to know a person. Her friend’s opinion on a person are also very likely to sway her opinion on said person if she doesn’t know them well. Christina is a rather caring soul to most people, although she finds is hard to care for the snobbish or constantly catty who are her age, those younger than her she can care for regardless of personality. She is very cheerful and energetic and is often up for a laugh. She’s a very loyal friend and will often try and fight her friend’s battles for them. Christina is also rathe charitable and is happy to roll up her sleeves to help out a friend or for a good cause. [/indent][hr] [url=http://fontmeme.com/calligraphy-fonts/][img]http://fontmeme.com/permalink/170402/3b85edca08a70d9be9009d6030191f0a.png[/img][/url] [color=FF8C00][b]Place of Origin;[/b][/color] [indent]The outskirts of Jacksonville, Georgia.[/indent] [color=FF8C00][b]Background;[/b][/color] [indent]Christina is the second of 4 children to John and Leslie Partridge, and the only daughter of the couple. The family of six live just outside of Jacksonville, Georgia. Her father had the makings of a profession violinist, he even went to college to study performance in music, however, his talent got him nowhere after college. He never tried to get anywhere with it so he never achieved anything. Instead he settled down with school teacher, Leslie, and, instead, went to work at a bank despite getting a few occasional local gigs. From a young age Christina showed a love for music and loved watched her father play the violin, she found such magic in the music it created. Eventually her father taught her how to play and, for her tenth birthday, brought her a violin. Given, it wasn’t a top brand but it was more than decent. Growing up the Partridge’s weren’t very moneyed, however, they had enough to survive. From a young age Christina learnt the importance of budgeting and saving. The family rarely did luxuries and saved what wasn’t spent on bills, groceries or the church offering was saved up for presents or to go out for dinner one night or for school camps. On top of this Christina’s parents drilled the importance of giving to the less fortunate into their children, dragging them along to soup kitchens to assist and encouraging them to partake in charity events. Much to her parents’ delight Christina took little convincing and soon came to partake in a lot of charity work. As she got older Christina love for music became unwavering and she started writing violin music for fun. (True, nothing grand but every composer must start somewhere.) Realising that this was something she wanted to do Christina set her dreams on becoming a composer for movies, aspiring to be the next John Williams. Knowing her parents couldn’t fund her college fees nor the costs of living elsewhere Christina starting taking on a casual job as a barista at one of the local cafes. Of course, being a casual barista does not pay well so as she neared the end of school she applied for a scholarship at The Art Institute of Atlanta. Although she got accepted into the program she didn’t get a scholarship. Taking it as a sign that she wasn’t ready Christina started a second job, working as a bartender in the evenings. It was Christina’s father who discovered about Hollywood University opening scholarship he ‘gently encouraged’ her to apply for a scholarship. This time successful she moved from her family a moth before she was due to start with high hopes. She found a job as awaitress to earn money in the meantime. [/indent] [color=FF8C00][b]Extra;[/b][/color] [indent]~ Christina is a Christian (Protestant) ~ Catherine Tate[/indent][hr][/hider] [/quote] I've added two new categories to the sheet. Face Claim and Dialogue Color. Once you've added those to the sheet, please let me know. :) [quote=@ChaoticFox] [hider=Rileigh] [center][h1][color=0072bc]Rileigh Maria Young[/color][/h1] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/qvhe10K.jpg[/IMG] [i]"The problem is not the problem, the problem is your attitude about the problem."[/i] -[b]Captain Jack Sparrow[/b][hr][/center] [color=0072bc][b][u]Name:[/u][/b][/color] [indent]Rileigh Maria Young[/indent] [color=0072bc][b][u]Nickname:[/u][/b][/color] [indent]Ry (Pronounced R-eye)[/indent] [color=0072bc][b][u]Birth Date:[/u][/b][/color] [indent]01/14/1996[/indent] [color=0072bc][b][u]Age:[/u][/b][/color] [indent]21[/indent] [color=0072bc][b][u]Zodiac Sign:[/u][/b][/color] [indent]Capricorn[/indent] [color=0072bc][b][u]Gender:[/u][/b][/color] [indent]Female[/indent] [color=0072bc][b][u]Sexuality:[/u][/b][/color] [indent]Bisexual[/indent] [color=0072bc][b][u]Rich or Poor:[/u][/b][/color] [indent]Rich[/indent] [color=0072bc][b][u]Trust Fund or Scholarship:[/u][/b][/color] [indent]Trust Fund[/indent] [color=0072bc][b][u]Major::[/u][/b][/color] [indent]Film Production[/indent] [color=0072bc][b][u]Minor::[/u][/b][/color] [indent]Music Recording and Production[/indent] [color=0072bc][b][u]Occupation:[/u][/b][/color] [indent] - Independant film-maker - Self made musician in Rock [/indent] [color=0072bc][b][u]Social Status:[/u][/b][/color] [indent]Middle class[/indent] [color=0072bc][b][u]Spending Habits:[/u][/b][/color] [indent]Infrequent, but high cost.[/indent] [color=0072bc][b][u]Face Claim:[/u][/b][/color] [indent]Chelsey Reist[/indent] [color=0072bc][b][u]Dialogue Colour:[/u][/b][/color] [indent]Blue[/indent] [color=0072bc][b][u]In Depth Appearance:[/u][/b][/color] [indent]Standing at 5’6” and weighing around 130 pounds, Rileigh could be described as the athletic equivalent of a California girl. Her body borders the line between slender and muscular, perhaps a bit stocky, though still retaining the expected curves. Her soft face and gentle blue eyes are bordered by locks of long blonde hair, commonly found in a ponytail. Inked into her skin on her shoulder blades are matching tattoos of ravens, and a tattoo of a monochrome tiger can be seen running down the right side of her neck and down underneath her shirt. [color=0072bc][b][u]Clothing Style:[/u][/b][/color] Her attire usually consists of a comfortable pair of faded jeans and a white tank top, covered by a loose plaid shirt whose sleeves have been rolled up, and generally left unbuttoned. A summer dress is not uncommon for her to wear around campus, though mainly only on her days off. Around her apartment she is usually found wearing plaid pyjama bottoms and whatever top she feels like wearing, along with her favourite slippers. For outdoor footwear, a pair of riding boots or comfy flats adorn her feet.[/indent] [color=0072bc][b][u]Likes:[/u][/b][/color] [indent] - Most types of rock and punk music, along with most EDM genres - Foreign foods - Watching sunsets - Waking up at the crack of dawn (No time to waste!) - The feeling of accomplishment after playing a song flawlessly or finishing a project - Socializing at parties - Spicy food [/indent] [color=0072bc][b][u]Dislikes:[/u][/b][/color] [indent] - Ignorance - Arrogance - Public speaking - Being interrupted - Snooty people [/indent] [color=0072bc][b][u]Habits | Quirks | Oddities[/u][/b][/color] [indent] - Has borderline OCD tendencies about the organization of her desk. - Often talks to herself to make decisions - Can't sit still without tapping her feet or playing with something in her hands - Will rearrange almost anything so that it is efficient to use or access - Bites her lip subconsciously when she is thinking [/indent] [color=0072bc][b][u]Hobbies:[/u][/b][/color] [indent] - Watching horror movies - Snowboarding - Surfing - Playing guitar [/indent] [color=0072bc][b][u]Fears:[/u][/b][/color] [indent] - Mice in her apartment - Snakes (why does it always have to be snakes…) - Clowns - Having her drink drugged [/indent] [color=0072bc][b][u]Personality:[/u][/b][/color] [center][u]♦ Focused ♦ Irritable ♦ Kind ♦ Stubborn ♦[/u][/center] [indent]Rileigh is a rather outgoing individual. She loves to socialize and hang out with friends, and generally is very approachable. At social events she will frequently engage with the outliers, trying to break the ice and warm them up to the rest of the crowd. She is extremely focused when it’s time to get shit done, and therefore can be rather jumpy when working on a project. Because of this she often misses things outside her skill set and doesn't see the bigger picture. Rileigh however, is also easy to anger. Her fuse is short and easy to light, and she has held legendary grudges that have lasted for months. She is quite stubborn once she's made up her mind, but this also translates into extreme determination and she will often go many hours without sleep if it means finishing the task at hand. [/indent] [hr][center][h1][color=0072bc][u]History[/u][/color][/h1][/center] [color=0072bc][b][u]History:[/u][/b][/color] [indent]Born in the bustling city of New York, Rileigh was an odd child to say the least. Her real parents couldn’t afford to keep her, so they had put her in an orphanage shortly after she was born. At around three years old, she was adopted by her new father, a well off businessman who developed software for large corporate companies. The two lived in a beautiful high rise in the downtown core, where he home schooled her for the first few years of her life. He taught her all the basics including learning to read and write, as well as some sciences. However, her education in math and computers was the high point during this time. She learned basic coding in a good three to four languages by the time she was finishing the public school curriculum and had also learned how to assemble a computer and how to troubleshoot it when something went wrong. Of course, like any child, she was always more interested in the games one could run on a computer and frequently got distracted from her homework by them. After finishing public school, her father got a job offer in California and after getting all of the paperwork in order, the two of them moved there so he could pursue his career further. Rileigh started high school, her first year at school with other people. It was rough for the first little while. No one was really interested in computer programming and she’d never felt more lonely in her life. At home, she often kept to herself and her computer, either writing increasingly advanced code or playing games. Rileigh had also begun to branch out into the world of photography, keeping a personal blog of her daily life that was peppered with her pictures. High school graduation day was probably the happiest she had been in a long time. Being the youngest one there was interesting, yet satisfying at the same time; Rileigh had skipped grade ten because of her excellent previous education. Much to her father’s disappointment, she had quickly put coding on a sidetrack and switched her focus to film, video editing and photography. She was quick to move out despite her father’s protests and finished her college education in computer sciences four years later. She moved out to Hollywood into a small apartment after applying to the University, having set up her vide[/indent] [hr][center][h1][color=0072bc][u]Misc.[/u][/color][/h1][/center] [color=0072bc][b][u]Extra: (Probably Russell Crowe or Johnny Depp) [/u][/b][/color] [indent] Nothing extra to add really.[/indent] [/hider] [/quote] Is the history section done? It just says vide then it's cut off. Once you have completed the history section, please let me know. :)