[@candlelitcraft] -- I like the CS. Just a few points; You need to declare muggle as a blood status and while I'm not that big on character history, my co-GMs might be, so I'd try to expand it a little. I don't want an entire life story, but a little more flesh, like a full paragraph. As a last note, well done on the personality. EDIT: Here's that with formatting. [hider=Viola][center][h1]~ Viola Stratton ~[/h1] ________________________________________ ________________________________________ [img]http://redirect.viglink.com/?format=go&jsonp=vglnk_15018145352268&key=df797c6edb7c14f9b66bc241a31bf453&libId=j5x9kgqn01000f5t000MAyxodvrl70gfi&loc=http%3A%2F%2Fweheartit.com%2Fentry%2F250904273%2Fvia%2Fwistfulabsence&v=1&out=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.google.it%2Fsearch%3Fq%3Dpale%2Bindie%2Baesthetic%2Bgrunge%2Btumblr%26client%3Dsafari%26hl%3Dit-it%26prmd%3Disvn%26source%3Dlnms%26tbm%3Disch%26sa%3DX%26ved%3D0ahUKEwjdwLjJ4ofOAhVHK8AKHXPBDMIQ_AUICCgB%26biw%3D320%26bih%3D372%23imgrc%3DQOzNdVm99a4giM%253A&title=Image%20about%20okeysage%20in%20%F0%9F%8C%BF%20by%20%2F%2Fb4by%20girl%20on%20We%20Heart%20It&txt=%0A%20%20%20%20%3Cimg%20alt%3D%22girl%2C%20tumblr%2C%20and%20hair%20image%22%20src%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fdata.whicdn.com%2Fimages%2F250904273%2Flarge.jpg%22%3E%0A[/img] ________________________________________ ________________________________________ [h1]General Information[/h1] ::[b] Full Name[/b] :: Viola Rosaline Stratton :: [b]Nicknames[/b] :: Vi :: [b]Gender[/b] :: ♀ Female :: [b]Date of Birth[/b] :: 17 August 2006 :: [b]Blood Status[/b] :: :: [b]Appearance[/b] :: Her hair is naturally brown but she started dying it platinum blonde a little before she received her Hogwarts acceptance letter because she wanted to shake it up before going to a new school. She has blue eyes, one a tiny bit more grey than the other. She has a bit of a RBF which makes it a little difficult for her to make new friends. [h1]Family Information[/h1] :: [b]Family Members[/b] :: Mary Brooks-Stratton [i]Mother, Muggle[/i] Occupation: Primary school teacher Marshal Stratton [i]Father, Muggle[/i] Occupation: Works for the government Kenneth Stratton [i]Brother, 20, Muggle[/i] Occupation: Student at college overseas Beatrice Stratton [i]Sister, 7, Muggle[/i] Occupation: Student :: [b]History[/b] :: She grew up with loving parents who were often busy with her other siblings. She always felt overshadowed by her siblings and was really excited to discover she was a witch. [h1]Personal Information[/h1] :: [b]Pet[/b] :: A long-eared owl named Nyx. :: [b]Wand[/b] :: [i]Cedar. Phoenix tail feather. 13 ¾’. Surprisingly swishy.[/i] [b]Cedar[/b][i] Whenever I meet one who carries a cedar wand, I find strength of character and unusual loyalty. My father, Gervaise Ollivander, used always to say, ‘you will never fool the cedar carrier,’ and I agree: the cedar wand finds its perfect home where there is perspicacity and perception. I would go further than my father, however, in saying that I have never yet met the owner of a cedar wand whom I would care to cross, especially if harm is done to those of whom they are fond. The witch or wizard who is well-matched with cedar carries the potential to be a frightening adversary, which often comes as a shock to those who have thoughtlessly challenged them. [/i] [b]Phoenix tail feather[/b] [i]This is the rarest core type. Phoenix feathers are capable of the greatest range of magic, though they may take longer than either unicorn or dragon cores to reveal this. They show the most initiative, sometimes acting of their own accord, a quality that many witches and wizards dislike. Phoenix feather wands are always the pickiest when it comes to potential owners, for the creature from which they are taken is one of the most independent and detached in the world. These wands are the hardest to tame and to personalise, and their allegiance is usually hard won.[/i] :: [b]Personality[/b] :: Viola is very artistic and prides herself on being mature for her age. She likes to draw, sculpt, paint, cross-stitch, and do basically any other type of art, though she’s not very good at most of them. She’s naturally loud and very unapologetic about that. She also is obsessed with magic information and has been soaking up every bit of knowledge she can on the wizarding world ever since receiving her letter. She is very good at controlling her temper and likes to think through every option before making choices. This leads to her missing out on opportunities. She’s easily distracted and usually ignores more pressing matters to focus on something that caught her interest instead. :: [b]Habits | Oddities | Quirks[/b] :: She chews pens and picks at her skin. She talks really fast and switches up letters a lot (ex: Yew Nork). ::[b] Likes[/b] :: She really likes contemporary art and history. She loves to listen to and tell stories about anything. She’s a bit of a gossip and loves listening to her friends talk about their days. :: [b]Dislikes[/b] :: She doesn’t like talking to people who she feels aren’t as intelligent as her. She hates being bored and sitting still for too long. She also doesn’t like the quiet. :: [b]Fears[/b] :: Her biggest fear is purgatory and the unknown. She’s scared of having the people she loves turn on her. She has a weird fear of earwigs but is fine with other bugs. :: [b]Worth to Mention[/b] :: Magic doesn’t come very naturally to her but she refuses to give up when faced with challenges.[/center][/hider] You need to copy the image address for the image to work.