A few of you are neglecting telling us what combat skills your character will be bringing to the table. This is very important because we need to know the power/skills of those we accept. Please make sure you be creative but that you don't leave the important details out when it comes to the final two sections of the CS! :)

Now some feedback, however we probably won't pick our two players until Monday evening so feel free to tweak your submissions leading up to that point. If you haven't submitted, you have a few more days left.

[@ineffable] When you list "martial arts" under hobbies, does that mean he studies in concept or actually practices them? I think there is a difference in say reading books as opposed to physical training. And if he does train, I don't think I could accept "all of them" as being a suitable singular hobby. I would want just one style of martial arts to be focused on since that seems better balanced but also more realistic. 

With his personality "cunning" and "sly" are too similar in my mind. Could you change one of those to something else?

For Ambitions, does he wish to stay in town or move on?

And for Uncertainties, are you implying he'd use physical strength along with spiritual? I need to know where his strength lies in terms of his spiritual side and how he might fight demons. So you need to add that information too.

[@Emuxe] As [@SoleAccord] pointed out, you need to add some details to Uncertainties. And I would like to be assured that her sort of bratty attitude (at least I think you're going for that) isn't going to make her irredeemable and unable to cope in a group. She isn't a lone wolf but I fear she may be tough to work with and if that's the case it may be tough for her to prove herself a good enough person to warrant a second chance, unless you're hoping to give her some sort of introspective growth during the first two small arcs leading up to the group coming back to life?

[@Kassarock] Looks good except for his spiritual strength and awareness and how that would be used. How do you see him being in terms of combat or in an investigative situation? What skill will he hone? Maybe something to do with fishing or his rod or what?

[@Natsu] Sorry I didn't get back to your PM but like the others, I would like you to stick to concise short answers for Personality and Hobbies, mostly it's to see if you can edit yourself but also if you can follow directions. I don't need to know the guy's life story before we even start, that's just doing extra unnecessary work. XD So I highly encourage you to retool your CS in Personality and Hobbies but to also give more info about what you mean when you say he'll augment his spirit energy. Do you mean like floating projectiles? How big can they get? Do they compare to say throwing stars or playing cards or just orbs?