[@Noodles]

Looks like our chars have quite a lot in common :D They'd be able to relate to other (if they can get over their stand-offish tendencies first lol)

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1.Overall grammar and sentence structure
Your cs has lots of grammatical errors, misuse of tense and prepositions etc. (*cough* soul jam *cough*). I'm not a grammar nazi but it's hard to turn a blind eye to a post that's chock full of errors. Could you please go over your cs once again? 

2. Walpurgis night
This event hasn't occurred yet in the current timeline of the rp. Right now, its the storyline finale that the plot is geared towards.

3.Despair
Your character has the experience of a veteran and a despair level of 4. The whole "she was worse off before being a magical girl" thing sorta contradicts that. Like, she can't possibly be completely okay. She lost a few friends along the way too, afterall. Perhaps deep down she has a new worry that gnaws at her?


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