[quote=@ProPro] [@Zero Hex] It is unfortunate, but I have to deny you. It appears that you did not read the rules. My additional critiques for the character himself would be that he literally has no history, and you spread him over pretty thin by giving him a wide range of both jobs and abilities related to those jobs. I'm not sure if he was intended to be the jack of all trades and able to "back up" the primary crew members as an assistant, but it ends up feeling like he has less of his own identity and focus. This is a shame, because these are all fairly easy fixes and I enjoy the concept. He'd add a great amount of cultural value. I'm sorry, but Samu Isaia is denied on those grounds. [/quote] I did say he wasn't completed, it's right there at the top of the post, just thought I'd drop what I had to show that yea I'm working on it. As for the rest, I literally focused on one thing alone which was being a crazy island fisherman that wrestles with Sea Kings. I am honestly not sure how that didn't come across because I laid it on pretty thick despite not having the backstory up. It's there in his epithets, his position includes "fisherman", his Jolly Roger is a guy on top of a dead sea king with fists for crossbones, his ambitions are all about going from sea to sea killing Sea Kings, his first like is "fishing", his quirks include that he doesn't actually know how to use fishing gear, his wrestling skill tells you this is how he does his fishing. He's practically a bear slapping salmon out of a river, but also a crazy person doing it in One Piece. He can guide a boat because you need to if you're alone and going off to fish, also because the joke is that the navigator is the crazy person that loves hunting monsters rather than the calm and collected weather sorceress. He can swim good because he fishes by pummeling sea creatures, he has to know to deal with water. He has a joke thing about tying rafts together because he's a crazy islander who wrestles sea monsters, why wouldn't he try to do it on a bunch of logs and rope. I'm legitimately not sure if you actually read the CS or you just skimmed and rejected me for defending the weird horse fish here. Which, you know, I'd understand I'd just rather be told that.