[@neogreggory]

Thankies Neo, happy to help ya~

[@Queentze]
Alright, Kitsune! I love him. Fluffy tails and all~

That said, there are a couple of things we would like you to change. First of all, most students that possess magic of any sort are not going to have anywhere near sixteen points in skill in something. We're not going to allow for very many exceptions to this rule.

If you would kindly change his skill in lightning magic to level ten at max, that would be much appreciated. That's what he's here for after all, to learn how to harness his abilities and control them.


Now, after discussing it with Neo and the others a bit, we have decided to ask you to also change 'Fox Fire' to an ability rather than magic. Fox Fire is something [i]all[/i] kitsune's are naturally capable of doing, as such it is an ability of theirs, not a magical craft. So if you could move that to the 'Ability' section and remove the skill in Fire Magic as well since we are assuming that is there because of the Fox Fire (Correct us on that if we're wrong), that would also be greatly appreciated.

Thankies~

And to clarify: An 'Ability' is something a creature is innately born with. An Ifrit's flame, or Dragon's fire breath or inhuman strength. 
Magic, is something learned over time that not everyone of a persons race is born with.