[@Scarescrow][@Tenma Tendo][@Zamokra41][@Duoya][@Athoriel][@Tominas] So I hinted at a weakness on your very first mini boss. I wrote the IC in second person just to lay it down for you as writers. When I say "you, you, you, do this, this, feel this, that..." I'm just giving your senses some food. You can write your Spirit going through the whole experience however you want. They can't speak yet, but they are free to think. Just no other Spirit can hear their thoughts. As we previously discussed, defeating the mini boss is your first task. [b]Edit:[/b] I did some post clean up since I posted the IC out of excitement. It should be all revised and cleaned up a bit now. :) [b]Edit2:[/b] I changed it to Souls cannot speak to present a writing challenge and to also show how miserable their lives can be. Funny though, some writers like playing the cliche mute character.