[@ineffable] Think you can flesh out the character a bit more in terms of personality? Such as is she any different when in disguise etc. Same thing with the history, I understand who she is on a basic level but what about her alter ego and the effects it has had on her life. Why did she start being a hero etc.

If you want to keep key points as spoiler territory make a note, but don't hide too much.

[@FunnyGuy] Accepted, looks great!! The 'Space' drawback makes me think of the The Timetraveler's Wife, if I am understanding the risk that he can literally get stuck there. Does time move any slower or?