Silyan if you start writing again let me know, I not only wish to read more but I want start writing as well, and I feel like having someone else writing as well would make it...easier? idk, it's like a friendly competition or something, motivate each other and help each other out And if I were to change Adrian, I would make him a bit more dependable...but I would also add some other things to make him even less dependable, because i'm nice to my characters y'know!