[@Dark Light]: I just finished going through it. Matching the two posts side by side, it is obvious that you did try to parallel it by using similar structures and changing the mood from her excitement to his fear. However, for example "From [young] Alice Blackwood's companion to the captain of the ship, to finding" is word for word the same as Fantasy's, with the exception being the brackets. Another example is the direct word for word line of "expected to have some sort of ally here." A lot of the post seems to be you just adding in one word to make it different, which is [b]still considered plagiarism.[/b]

This is really unacceptable. I was hoping that it would just be some slight things you ripped off, but given that it's large pieces, you have six hours from this post to rewrite your post -- anything currently written there CANNOT be reused. It is null and void. Start over. If you fail to do this, you will be removed from the roleplay.