[quote=@KOgaming]
[@StarInaBox]

Dinosmasher's Fury is probably one of the best structure decks out there. That said, you don't become champ just by putting three structure decks together. Where's Giant Rex? Where's Double Evolution Pill? Where's Dragonic Diagram? Rescue Rabbit? This isn't 2013. Why are you using Gameciel over Dogoran? You know? The one you can actually search?

That said, your character's history is kinda bland and the deck is kinda basic. I don't think you'd do very well in this RP.
[/quote]

As far as the deck goes, this is actually the deck I use IRL, save some Extra Deck monsters. No ARK or Ragnazero. But it's one of the few decks in the game I enjoy. Dogoran, I actually forgot I could search, so I should definitely change that instead of hoping for a Gameciel draw. Dragonic Diagram is useless because no True King Draco's. Rescue Rabbit triggers Lost World, I can swarm 4 Dino's on the field turn 1. Double Evolution Pill wouldn't work in pure Dino's either, since you need a non Dino to use it. And Giant Rex seems plausible, I'm just not sure what I would take out for it. As far as effectiveness goes, pure Dino's have placed pretty high in regional tournaments since the structure deck came out.

As for the character, I didn't want to go too overboard with him, but I can't argue with the lack of content. The point of the character was to be a normal guy who liked the game and happened to be good at it, a little different from a world full of those who religiously play the game. If you'd like, though, I could add some more flavor, or make a character who would be more fitting in the universe. Perhaps an updated deck that isn't 3 structure decks thrown together is in order, as well.