[@Grimoire] I have a couple concerns. Sultan would likely have scores altogether totaling in the mid teens or maybe the low twenties, and there really should be a limitation to certain powers, namely Scry and Barrier. People can have Scry-resistant cloaking, and there's no such thing as impenetrable, not even with all possibly relevant scores at 20. It is also recommended that construct creation be limited to one active construct at a given time, or to the creation or summoning of a familiar of some description. So, nerf your skills a smidge, adjust your scores, and, once the other GMs and myself have reached a majority decision, one of us will get back to you with either a minor edit, or, more probably, the green light for your character.