[@KawaiiKyouko]

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Alright, srs tiem now. I agree with much of what has been said so far, namely that Magic Resistance of a modest or low Rank should be added, Bow and Arrow Creation is redundant given Servants seemingly being able to spawn arrows, daggers, and most non-NP weapons out of nothing, Military Tactics or Clairvoyance being good replacements for the previous, and her "OUR ARROWS WILL BLOT OUT THE SUN!" NP running on her Master's prana being a terrible idea. Those are all things that you should fix, and thankfully, they're relatively easy things to patch.

However, there are two other issues I'd like to add. First is that instead of giving this Rider-class Servant a horsey NP like some have mentioned, you gave her an NP that's basically Achilles' Dueling Field except it's at a lower rank and therefore probably less costly to use despite doing pretty much the same thing (also fuck Achilles and his OP bullshit, seriously). I would suggest ditching that NP and replacing it with the mount NP that has so far been discussed. Second is that I think she could honestly stand to have higher AGL and MAG rather than STR and END, since Rider's whole job is to go fast and spam Anti-Army NPs that guzzle mana like a wizard with the shits.