-me sighs-

Here I go

[@GrizzTheMauler]

[quote]Personality Strengths:

Having lived most of his life being viewed as weaker by his society, Corinth has proven that he's rather hardy, both in body and in mind. He doesn't go down until the fight's over. He's incredibly loyal and is very generous with what he has. Corinth actively tries to disprove many stereotypes, especially the ones his race have against others and themselves.

Personality Flaws:

Corinth is rather brash and known for a temper that can cause a lot of damage to things and people around him. When angry he's not someone you want to be near, since he stops caring about consequences and acts on his instinct. This behavior causes him to have bouts of depression, as he's not exactly able to control himself since he's rather young.[/quote]

I feel his personality could just be about anybody. It's rather vanilla and doesn't really make him stand out as a person. Fine, but at the same time I am not really feeling it.

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Powers:

Ergokinesis: Corinth is able to manipulate nearly any form of energy like all of his race, however, due to his lux(gender) as a Loren, he is only able to generate and store up to 150kA of energy which he stores as electricity or light. The more he uses his powers, the higher the risk of losing control and causing an explosion. He generally uses his powers to set up precision strikes or aid in his melee attacks. In a fight against a Vulux, one's strategy is to slowly whittle down the amount of energy they have until they can no longer use their power and become little more than fodder... However Corinth refuses to reveal how strong the Vulux Gors really are, giving only a comment about "We'd have your energy problems completely solved." when he was introduced to Earth's energy grid.
"Light is my favorite. Some Gor can even manipulate hardlight. They dive deep into thermal vents that we have on Vulu."

Regeneration: Corinth has a high regeneration rate... So long as he's exposed to or is storing several Amperes of energy for a while. All Vulux possess this ability and Corinth has mentioned that yes, Vulux give each other energy to heal wounds.
"Band-Aids are very primitive... You seriously have a long way to go..."

Minor Gravity Manipulation: His specialization as a Vulux is in creating Gravitational Anomalies. So far he can only use this to fly, increase his strength and make things heavier.
"I generally up the gravity on me... We've got higher grav on my planet. And better weather. And Food."

Combat Body: His body is much more durable and s immune to Earth's toxins and diseases. Has higher strength as well.
"Haven't gotten sick once here. Guess its because of our different biology. Though it seems I'm just slightly stronger than you guys buy a thousand pounds. I think the Hulk or Juggernaut could be the only ones to go toe to toe with a mature Gor though... And I doubt even they could beat the Sages... They are like, actual monsters among the Vulux."[/quote]

Your powers need to be tightened. Ergokinesis for example is too vague and wide. Energy can come from lots of things. Narrow it down to one and give it some real limitations, rather than the vague arbituary ones you have given it.

Most of the bodies like Regeneration and Gravity all need some kind of limit and you need expand on their detail of how they are used. 

I feel at this current time they are too broken, too open ended, and too vague to be acceptable.

He right now is sort of coming as Wolverine, but what if energy and gravity. If you stalked the interest check, my sheet states that I do not like absolute powers nor omni powers. So I generally don't like when someone can just do anything and everything. 

Otherwise the character itself is okay. It's not jumping out to me. He seems like a generic everyday super hero. Which again is fine, but I generally do like when people go for more creative. Especially when it's coming so close to the wire as I wait for two other people.

Your sheet is pending until the things I address are addressed, in a respectful manner please.