[@Ambra]

Actually, the 5th-grade story is based on something I once did in RL, cost me a year in the special classes. I could go into detail but it would be boring. 

My grammar is I know horrible and it was checked by my meager word program and I thought fixed by that program. I don't mind the shifts in the story, I am adaptable on that level but feel if the issue of grammar is too much then perhaps it's best that I don't pollute the thread with my lack of talent and let you recruit a replacement before it's too late.