Hah! Glad I'm not the only one. I think one of the most difficult parts for me is how to end a conversation. There's no way to do that without it being at least a little awkward. Wow, thank you so much! That totally made my day! :D You're the one who inspired me to improve on my characters and helped me improve on my writing, so thank [b]you[/b]! <3 I actually had a question about spacing paragraphs, if you don't mind. For the most part, I think I understand when I am supposed to space them, but I've been stumped a few times. [hider=For example...] In this, I couldn't decide what I was supposed to do. Should I have made a new paragraph when Ghent asks her the question? [i]"R-Right. Sure." Ghent hoped he didn't sound as uncertain as he felt. After an awkward pause, he gripped the straps of his backpack and stepped in closer. [color=lightcoral](So a new paragraph would have gone here)[/color] "Like this? Or...no? Yes?" Elayra was already moving, but Ghent couldn't tell if he was too close, or not close enough. Cringing at his own awkwardness, he settled on keeping two steps between them.[/i] I wasn't sure, so I left it as one whole paragraph. ^^' [/hider] No rush! Hoping that you get lemons this week. No more chainsaws!