[@The Harbinger of Ferocity]These are my only comments/criticisms: [b]As a fighter, Theron is best avoided in direct confrontation.[/b] There was something about this line at the end of your fighting style explanation that seemed very very redundant. Only because this is a fighting game and so direct confrontation is going to happen any way, and it can be said for all the characters applying to this game. [b]Roaring Palm[/b] You say from the "strong side." I suppose you mean like dominant side? What is his dominant hand? I originally had "Handedness" as an option in the CS, but I got rid of it, but this is making me want to add it back in the CS. [b]Rending Point[/b] I see this working only if a bladed object were on the elbow. An elbow is still a blunt strike.