[h3]NOTE: Do not post in the character tab. I'll be throwing all the sheets in one master post, for the sake of keeping it clean.[/h3]

[@FrostedCaramel] Fantastic sheet, welcome to the crew. I'll throw him up when I get the chance. 

[@Raknarion] Awesome. All I'm going to nitpick you on is a little discrepancy. He just came out of boot camp, but he's a Private First Class. To my knowledge, in the real USMC, completing training makes you a PFC (according to Wikipedia). However, in the Halo Universe, marines straight out of training are Privates and are later promoted to PFC (Accord to the Halo Wiki). If you could change either his experience or his rank, then you're all set. 

[@caliban22] There's nothing really [i]wrong[/i] about your sheet, but I'm going to ask that you clean it up a bit. Just make it a little nicer looking, so it's not just a wall of text, and see if you can patch up a few of the grammatical errors that I caught. Other than that, there's the fact that you mention Adam's uncle, and then promptly go on to talking about his cousin, totally forgetting about the uncle. Essentially, it's an alright sheet, it just needs to be cleaned up a bit.