[@Zombehs]

This is actually really good. You're in.

[@Dead Cruiser]
This is mostly okay, but I have one issue to address. It looks like you mentioned mind-control multiple times, including your weapons' special abilities. This is generally a big "No" for me in games. We did have one player get a similar ability, but it's limited to one non-player non-boss mook at a time. You'll need to either drastically reduce the ability's power to this level, or ditch it altogether. You can also swap out for a different ability for your weapons, if you think that's fair.