[@ReusableSword] It's well formatted, clean, and interesting. It's a solid sheet, but the issues that [@datadogie] mentioned are there. It's mostly lore stuff. If you can change everything he mentioned, fantastic, but at [i]least[/i] provide some more info as to how he went from being ONI's golden boy to being some random-ass marine in Whiskey Squad. Also, your sheet insinuates that Whiskey Squad has been together for some time, but it hasn't. I'll concede, that's my bad, since I've never really explicitly mentioned that. Fix those issues, and I'll be a happy camper. Fix everything datadogie mentioned, and I'll be a [i]very[/i] happy camper.