[@Lmpkio] So is Mephilius ignoring Helena's voice that should be reaching everyone in the Nexus right now? [@Silvan Haven] First and foremost, you can do well off with formatting your text better and combining some lines into bigger paragraphs. Secondly, from the backstory, I take it that demons invaded his planet, angels showed up, and then saved the day? You need to make this more clear because as it is, it feels like I'm reading the middle portion of a novel with no context of what's going on. As for his powers and equipment, they should all be fine but explain to me exactly what "A Glimpse of the Truth" entails.