[quote=@PrinceAlexus] OK I'm copying off a phone i had a week and all so excuse wall of text etc that's not quite working in coding. Thought I'd give something different a potential go. And I know missing bits. WIP. The key parts are detailed in. I can even add a family tree! NOW FIXED AND SECTIONS FILLED IN. UPDATE 25/08/2017 about 10 edits later... :) [hider=CS ... NOw coding fixed. Thank you laptop. ] Legendary Black Templar High Marshall Avatar of PrinceAlexus 315 posts in 41 days Online 2 days ago Ok, might as well give something different a go. Worth a shot so here i go, i can find pictures and such later on. A modified previous character of mine. WIP V1.1 [-] [img]https://i.pinimg.com/736x/80/3e/27/803e27daf0894e4fdfac0c353b1062f3--manga-girl-sad-blonde-anime-girl.jpg[/img] Name: Lady Marilania Olympus Age: 27 Appearance: fairly Athletic, long straight Blonde and with a penchant for skirts she remained in good shape after professional sports, though now is quite abit off her competition times. Always wearing a silver necklace in the style of 3 moons linked together gifted from an old friend, and a diamond ring that belonged to her grandmother which she values above all other things. She has a scar on stomach she tries to downplay and looks much like her mother but has eyes nearly identical to her father in a fairly cold grey. Has distinct English accent, despite having moved about still quite strong. Height: 5’5 Weight: 130 pounds. Likes: Pancakes Flying Driving, Mostly SUV and off roaders. Coffee Exploring old ruins and local towns Technology Awful movies Swimming Rock music Dislikes: Crash landings Smoking being a passenger Deceptions, lies and intriques Ultra packed locations Cold weather/places Navy/Ships. Long term ties to where she lives Party Trick: After years with no real permanent home she has long adapted to being able to seem comfortable in any place seemingly regardless of her circumstances regardless of her true feelings. Though this also means it’s hard to sometimes work out what’s truly real. Also can make chocolate filled pancakes, (chocolate filling) Profession: Co Crew on a local cargo and short haul airline. (also works in there small inner city office when not flying cago's and does general paperwork and runs the front office) Bio/Personality: Daughter of an English noble family, her mother Lady Maria raised her alone after her father Vesarian a captain and owner of a shipping enterprise involved in several less than above board jobs left her before she was born. Raised on the family estate she was taught for her younger years quickly learning to be fluent in both Latin and English as an old family tradition dictated. Sent off to a private academy when she was barely in secondary education, she soon found her skills after an injury on running track in the swimming pool and won multiple awards in various championships. Though this time was not all easy, being away from family for so long, being abandoned as a child and a lack of a “home” took its toll despite her privileged background and family name. Things turned round when she took a flying lesson for fun as part of the academies extracurricular programme; she soon took to it and passed her full license just before she was 18. Returning home to her family, the manufacturing business was turning nasty and a rival firm moving meant her happy reunion was shortlived soon sucked into the internal battles, rivalries internal and external that had plagued the family for decades. Worse still when a mugging went wrong left her with a now scar she hides on her stomach she decided to try and find her own way and escape her family’s internal pull down into its darkside of wealth. Meeting her step sister Victoria and her father just before she left was the final straw and headed off and worked for a mix of local airlines, helicopter taxi and other jobs before now taking a role at the Shine city cargo line and settling down into a smaller but well-furnished top floor apartment in one of the outer districts. Recently arrived into the city she has not got many ties to the place, renting everything out of habit from a pre furnished apartment, to an offroad SUV (land rover Discovery) on short term leases, never wanting long term ties to a place. Personality wise she is fairly confident, flirty but also takes a while to warm to people having moved about so much. Fairly easy going, slower to trust though and less willing to forgive. Not always wanting to get very close to people as less to deal with when she moves on. Maybe the new city will change her outlook or just be another stamp on the passport. Caring but again takes time for that to happen after many moves, and too many people. Generally takes time for true self to evident. Theme Song: This one isn't an actual requirement, but we think it’d be fun if you added it anyways. ^.^ [/hider] [/quote] So anyone Yes, no, just give me a answer yes, no, edits needed etc :) Answers by post, Online, or suspersonic plot advancement ravens ;) [@Delta44][@Dynamo Frokane]