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[@Altered Tundra] I left some notes in your CS as a 'review' :)

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Overall, I really like your character. He has an interesting back story and his personality will no doubt clash with others in the RP. I'm interested to see how you handle that as a writer, and how you can develop Kalthar throughout. There is great opportunity just from what you've written to make him pretty epic in the RP.


More than happy to provide notes and thoughts on any other CS too, just shout :)
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Much obliged, friend! Glad to see someone other than me liked Kalthar. :)