Whew... that's an info dump if I've ever seen one. The sheer amount of worldbuilding and details are commendable, but I'm a little lost on the aim of the RP. I know the basic aim is "Acquire more power," but it's unclear whether this is nation or character-centric. Also, there are a whole lot of pre-established kingdoms and peoples; are players supposed to control these, or are they NPCs? 

To summarize, this reads like a big setting overview, but lacks clear instructions and expectations of what to do with it.