Hello Everyone, 

	I wanted a few minutes of your time. I have been putting some touches to a roleplay currently under the works right now. I hoped to find some people who could skim it over and give some critique. It is based on something I am currently writing, and I feel that if it doesn't sell well as a roleplay, it probably won't sell well as a novel series. I've looked it over a few times but having a second opinion always helps. If there is any questions or concerns, please address them. Thank you and I greatly appreciate it. 


Here is the link. 
https://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/166520-test-role-play/ooc