Not bad. I'm not surprised you already have people trying to join. You know you've done it right when people are already filling out the character sheet. The formatting is nice, and you instantly know it's sci-fi/post-apocalyptic with just a skim. But if you want a critique... I found the entire DJ section kind of long. It was a good way to get a feel for the RP's atmosphere, but for an interest check, I really want to understand the scenario and my roll in it relatively quickly. I do like this approach, but it took DJ wildfire a while to tell me what amounts to "This is the future, it's ruined, and there are robots and zombies." Fortunately, roleplayers who choose to skip this part will still be able to understand what the RP is about by reading your bullet points. This might be nitpicking, but I'm not sure everyone who is interested in this type of roleplay is going to have seen one piece. They are more likely to have played borderlands, etc. Will this sink your interest check? probably not. But it might be worth it to just explain what these "crazy towns" are. I actually thought this was a serious RP until I got to reading further in. You may (emphasis: may) want to consider putting up a few images that point to the more satire side of your RP. Your chosen aesthetics is amazing, it just all points to a very serious post apocalypse. [hider=Example] [img]https://i.pinimg.com/originals/e9/67/d4/e967d40908baf4831572c52c4886e7b1.jpg[/img] [/hider] I don't really see any major problems. I think you'll get enough people to start in no time, especially with the interest you already have.