What Medalliah said. I'll give my opinions but please, put characters in the OOC.

[@Nerdy Reference] Looks pretty good to me. Consider Valerie accepted.

[@Jaded] This one needs some work. I'll need to see the bio, the personality needs a little more detail, and if you could just clean it up a little bit for readability, that would help as well. Once you do that, Lucia will be accepted.