[@Dealdric], sorry that it took us a little while to comment, but here's our general remarks;
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[*]It needs to be written up as a Freak. Bodily changes due to powers are the hallmark of a Freak.
[*]Clarification on the ability: "Can he control the material around the shard?"
[*]Weakness: Ruby is nice, but then we remove the fact that his body is like or made up of ruby: instead and insectoid form?
[*]Powers: Just bodily manipulation and telekinesis is fine.
[*]This reminds me personally of Deoxys, the Pokémon.
[*]A general all-round fleshing-out. More personality and power description mostly.
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So right now, 6/10. We'd let you in just on concept, but let's refine it before we let him loose, yeah?