[quote=@Inkarnate]
Looks good! Though the only thing I'd like to say is Nadalena shouldn't be seen as having a 'short fuse' because she is very good at hiding her extreme apprehension for people and social events! She can be dismissive and a bit [i]snipey[/i] at times (similar to a Olenna Tyrell, I suppose) but she does not have emotional control issues. I apologize if that what is seem I conveyed with her character!

Beyond that, good to get some interaction (that I didn't miss) here. Curious to see where we go from here.
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I see it. But its not that hard to think that she may have a bipolar temper. At least not from the way she is so hard to socialize with that's really more from Seyrun's POV. I guess that you could say that she's trying to be cautious, perhaps?

[quote=@Bushman501]
Oh no, Fitzgerald. Welp, I guess either a red slip or a yellow slip is coming. The problem is I do not know which!
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Fufufu. Poor Tilia, she just can't catch a break.