[@Ollumhammersong]

You seem to be missing a background. Also, did you take two toughness advances? Your sheet only lists one. Otherwise, it looks pretty good.
A note: You still get that combat shotgun and shells, something I recommend you hold onto. That heavy stubber has a -30 BS if it isn't properly braced, so it isn't exactly a gun that can be used on the move or during assaults.

[@Warborn123]

It looks pretty good. Your fellowship should be -3, not -2 I believe. Something tells me someone who sustained injuries like his might've been mustered out of service or at least put in a non-combat role, but what the hell, I won't be too strict about that.