You have my interest, but I have a few questions that come with it. The planet is described in an intentionally sparse, dreary-sounding way, which I dig, but it leaves me wondering about the planet. I figure because the plot of the story is "cosmonauts from awful planet seek nice planet", the culture and nuances of Myar don't matter so much since the story is about literally any planet [i]but[/i] Myar, but the fact that their planet is dangerous and their society is primitive leaves me wondering how they developed space-faring technology. The description of the mountain folk says that they recover and repair their ships, but I'd like a little more explanation on the subject. Are the ships just crashed alien vessels? Are they just recycling the same ships that make it home until there are none? Did they develop spaceships from planes after inventing engines like on Earth? [s]Are voidcrafts organic beings from Myar like EVAs?[/s]