@Joegreenbeen: Well, I feel like you could easily expand on the personality and appearance aspect, because as it is, some things are rather vague, and he does feel a bit generic. I also feel like stock telekinesis is quite a bit overused, and there isn't much here that gives me the impression you're trying anything different. Not to mention, being able to lift 500 tons is just ludicrously extreme, and implies incredible amounts of force. That's just... really overpowered, without much make things interesting again.

I'm going to have to ask you to rewrite your CS. I can't approve it as it is.

@Epiphany: Well, if you do decide to join, go ahead. I'm not closing things anytime soon.