[quote=@Samdragonx]
My CS is done. Can I get an A-proof-all? ^^
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Ravadon's background seems more like a whole life-story than a background. It starts with his birth, which is fine, but ends with his death, instead of ending at the point where our RP begins. It tells me a lot about Ravadon except for where he is now in his life.

At what point in the story does our RP begin?