Hm, aight. Let's see... [@Rin][@VitaVitaAR]: No issue for you two, so all clear. [@Grey Star]: Super regeneration and infinite bodies is... Worrisome. Also the kit itself feels kinda... I dunno, overloaded? Too much stuff in a single package means an overwhelming... Well, basically a force of nature at that point. Also, drawing parallels to other things that are in the series assumes we know the scale of what your referencing, and not everyone does, so. But yeah, core problem: legitimately no way to keep the character down without some really... Shady stuff, nor do I have a clear sense of scale as to how big or how fast your character can make/do stuff. So until I get a clearer picture, non. [@Dezuel]: Okay, let's... Ignore all the various issues with spelling and grammar in the forms for the moment and look at the actual characters, I guess. First character... Not many issues other than the writing ones. Big one is clarity on "impressive physical toughness, strength and most importantly speed". I need scale. Also technically you don't need to list literally every piece of clothing on them; just the important stuff like weapons and stuff works. Second... People did research for me. I found that the character can tank some seriously stupid bs with nary a scratch. So noperino. Third... No issue. All clear on that one. [@Crimson Raven]: Must be pre-existing. No player avatar-type characters. Anyways, forms, forms... Right, here we go. [hider=Shokuhou Misaki][b]Name:[/b] Shokuhou Misaki [b]Gender:[/b] Female [b]Appearance:[/b] [url=http://static.zerochan.net/Shokuhou.Misaki.full.1480251.jpg]"Hello there~!"[/url] [b]Personality:[/b] Misaki is, in short, a very mischevious and cunning person, though her demeanor at first glance seems to say the opposite. Though she often acts cheery and cutesy, in reality her somewhat self-serving nature is made clear when not digging into her own past. Her frivolity with her abilities is also something of a byproduct of her current situation, as she has the ability to do so. At the same time, though, Misaki has her own set of morals and tends to not bring harm or malicious misfortune on any targets of her ability... Regardless of whether or not they want to be manipulated in the first place. Amusingly enough, Misaki prefers working solo or with a partner rather than in large groups and, surprisingly enough, is able to compromise with Misaka when it comes to dealing with major problems throughout the city (such as the Elements, Kihara Gensei, or even the city itself). She's still a bit silly at times if the situation calls for it, and isn't below petty things like cutting in line for something she wants. [b]Brief History:[/b] Shokuhou Misaki, the Number 5 Level 5 in Academy City, is a [i]very[/i] popular person within the School Garden, having been dubbed the "Queen of Tokiwadai" due to her own overreaching influence over the school. The "Queen", of course, never ruled Tokiwadai as she does now, as about a year ago she had a chance meeting with a certain spiky-haired Kamijou Touma. Not unlike the more recent incidents with Misaka Mikoto, Touma also ended up happening upon Misaki sporadically throughout the summer of that year; it all came to an end, however, when a group of rogue ESPers who wanted to beat up Misaki attacked both her and Touma. While Misaki was eventually able to force the ESPers into beating one another up, the damage Touma had taken meant that he would either have to suffer through the pain of surgery to repair his body (and die of shock) or take anesthetics (which would lower his already-low blood pressure); either way, had Misaki not stepped in to use her ability to nullify Touma's ability to feel pain, he likely would have died. As an unfortunate side effect, the procedure left Touma with targeted amnesia towards Misaki and Misaki alone, and would never retain any memories related to her from then on. Of course, that was all in the past; as the Queen of Tokiwadai, Misaki's lifestyle is about what one would expect from a popular girl, with a few key exceptions: namely, the occasional incident where she steps in to try and resolve issues plaguing her past or for her own personal interests. How much she does or how much she succeeds, though, is another story entirely. [b]Universe of Origin:[/b] Raildexverse (A Certain Magical Index and other related series) [b]Equipment:[/b] A pocketbook with way too many remotes to count. Said bag also has a few essentials (quote her) such as a cellphone, purse, various forms of ID, and a certain little whistle. [b]Abilities:[/b] Misaki, as Academy City's No. 5 Level 5 ESPer, has the ability 'Mental Out'. In layman's terms, it is a form of mind control that works by manipulating bioelectricity within the brain and spinal fluid. To be more specific, Misaki manipulates the water within on an incredibly minute scale and alters its conductivity to enact her will on others. The ability has incredible breadth, having a range from anything as simple as a mental message to full-blown memory and emotion manipulation, provided she has a remote to channel her ability through. Of course, those abilities will be [i]severely[/i] toned down for the RP as follows: [list][*]No usage of mind control/memory manipulation/emotion manipulation on PCs/most major and minor NPCs with plot relevance. This is usually the biggest issue with mind control and all associated powers, after all, so let's just dodge that bullet right now. [*]Misaki can only manipulate one person in very fine detail with her mind control at a time, but more people (up to 5) can be used if given simple commands. She can memorize control groups (up to 3), but switching between them continuously is very taxing on her already-frail body. Simple commands can persist for a while after she's given them, bit only for so long. Adding a new group requires removing a prior one from memory. [*]Misaki's ability is limited almost exclusively to humans and beings that are humanoid in physiology unless she would have sufficient reason to be able to enact them on other things. This means that she cannot, say, take over animals, kaiju, ghosts, or other phenomena of that nature unless stated otherwise. [*]Memory manipulation is a delicate process and requires time to execute. She can enact mass memory wipes to remove an incident from public record, but the prior issues regarding immunity to mind control also apply here. She can wipe memory of being mind controlled as she gives control back, though, so that must be noted. [*] Mind control has a maximum range of 5 miles, and her ability to control people further than 3 miles out is not only far weaker, but also takes more effort on her part. Simple autonomous commands can persist for a period of time after they leave that area of control, but no more. [*]Misaki must have been in contact (as in face-to-face) with a target before mind controlling them. This does not apply to memory wipes, but does for more nuanced manipulation. To that end, she also cannot control by proxy, and will have to have met every relevant target for this to function. If that person was in a 'control group' that was since abolished, she will have to make contact again in order to be able to mind control them again. [*]Misaki must always use a remote to execute a command via mind control, and different commands require different remotes. She can only take control of (register) one person at a time, though, so she remains vulnerable while doing so. [/list] Misaki herself, though, is incredibly weak in terms of physical strength; while not "weak" in the most common sense of the word, she has zero physical strength and zero stamina for any activity that involves actually moving around; even a light jog is enough to wind her. [b]Other:[/b] For all intents and purposes, assume she's from NT18. In other words, she knows about the existence of magic, Othinus, and all the other messes that come about as a result of that. Also technically a bit about the Windowless Building. Nothing detailed, though, and I'll be making sure not to spoil people on more major plot developments if possible.[/hider] And before anyone flips, let me point out that I've gone into detail on the form on limitations I am imposing on the character (and myself) to make this work. Went out of my way to try and make the rules for her stuff in the RP as clear as possible. Read it yourself if you don't believe me :I