Nah the post was good, I was figuring you'd need to do some puppeteering or filling in the blanks and it all looks fine with me, honestly. XD

So then the last message is Hisano sending it to Tommy and while I don't know what Hisano wants, you'll reveal that come the reply to my post. Mine of course taking us there. 

Or was it Tommy who needed to speak urgently? I assume the former based on the text but I wanna be sure my post comes out right just in case.

I gotta go eat dinner and then get another post up but it's pretty likely I can get to this before I hit the hay~