[quote=@Grombus]
[@KoL] He's in the graveyard killing the spirits and undead? The post said there were undead there, and since they are shaped like humans he considers them like that. The plan was for him to meet a demon person, probably vampire rose chick and have her get him to join by telling him he can kill a bunch of humans in the war.

Also did I misread the post, I thought the whole place was a giant graveyard? So I was just having him pop in in some random section of the graveyard, and eventually end up where the other people are. Where he sides with the side that looks least like humans, eg. Demons. If that doesn't work I can change it, but I can't see what you mean by he's already in the basilica.
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He's description is incredibly hard to understand. You described light rays over head but that only happens in the basilica for the time being. Also, the entry posts makes it clear that there's only one way to get in there and it's through the faction specific portal. I can let this one go, since he was out of the RP for ages so it's possible that he reached the Graveyard on his own.

Either way, please make something less confusing next time. It's impossible to tell what's happening on your post without outside questioning like this. At least decide on his proper position and make that clear for us. Could make it so that you don't induce us to think that there are humans there when there's none as well, by using narration to explain that this is Maven's delusions, not what's really happening.

Also, keep in mind that Victoire would know that he's around, if he plans to sneak on her, unless he's a robot or other undead that's not a vampire/lich/similar thing. Also, currently she's on the Demon sector of the battlefield, planting traps, be aware of that if you plan to approach Victoire.

Other than that your post is relatively good, but please don't be this misguiding in the future.