[@Old Amsterdam]I changed it.  I hope this is better.  I will add more if still needed, but I completely changed my character from what it was earlier.  Also thank you about the image tip thing, I've been trying to post images on multiple rps.  I don't know what my friend will do, I haven't talked to him yet.  Please tell me if something is lacking in the character sheet.  Didn't know how to explain my power anymore....pretty basic and boring.  I just thought about using a character that had some special ability, but is still weaker.  I admit I also want to use goons.
sorry