[@LeamonZest89]

Good Cs though I should of been clear on the backstory. She wouldn't be completely alone, she would be hatched with the other dragons, well the same room as them just not the same area of the room. So you can have her be hatched alone in the room because the room is so big but there would be other dragons, other eggs.

The backstory is mostly to tell me where about in the room you are, how you hatched. So it should be rather short. The Rp will be starting just as she is hatching.

Lastly being a lightning dragon she wouldn't be affected by lightning at all. She would be able to control and manipulate lightning too.

Other than that it's good.

[@Assallya] Good Cs, just a few though.

Your backstory should be changed. The egg would be in the cave and have no human contact. However you can have it so the egg is placed inside a skeleton of a dragon or even near some ancient machines if you want.

Your power is good but not many people will allow you to eat their hearts and there won't many npc dragons if any. So I recommend you have your power 'able to see and copy a dragon's breath'

And I would be willing to allow you to copy multiple. If you have other ideas how to work it then that's fine.